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Love Deep Love
Contributed by
in_a_while
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Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 07:07:25 AM in AEST
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She's in my dreams, a smiling word
Love deep love, an echo heard
She's all smiles, for the birds
Love deep love, my sweetest words
She's my candy, much too sweet
Love deep love, I'd love to meet
She's my wings, to freedom of flight
Love deep love, towards moon light
She's my angel, to pour clean rain
Love deep love, be of no stain
She's my heart, beating strong
Love deep love, please hear this song...
As I strum further on till she's gone
To my Helen.
dw
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Re: Love Deep Love
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 11:19:35 AM AEST
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loving, and flows so sweetly, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Love Deep Love
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 01:17:34 PM AEST
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this is a great write.
I really liked how you used your words. good ideas put together well to display your emotions. good work
keep writing
keep smiling
sweetstranger
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