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a few words to a great friend
Contributed by
kaosar
on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 05:25:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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"Do you need anything
from Korea or Japan?
Do I send you something
from here, with Ghassan?"
No my friend , you're wrong
I don't think you're able ..
cause what I need is hard
to give, .and unbuyable..
five minutes of time
a few words of care
I know it's hard for you
I'm sorry that I dare
please be yourself back
this was never you
that nice caring friend
I really miss you!!
Copyright ©
kaosar
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2005-05-31 05:25:21]
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Re: a few words to a great friend
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 11:16:29 AM AEST
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wonderful poem, and so true, all the gifts in the world do not equal ones time:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: a few words to a great friend
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by brokenwings on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 01:16:30 PM AEST
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| this is sad may your friend find the time and see that you need them |
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Re: a few words to a great friend
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 08:22:24 AM AEST
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Oh Kaosar, this is so sad. I wish she would atleast talk to you for just minute. No one can be that busy for heavens sake. Even you call her on the telephone, she doesn't have time to talk!
Well, there's only one person you can change and that is yourself, so study hard, and try to forget, maybe one of these days she will relent!
Bless your heart
Warm love
consue
P.S. very good poem.
You are becoming quite proficent in English and can rhyme and everything. Good for you!! |
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