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Guilty
Contributed by
taurusgem1
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Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 03:07:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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"Guilty"
Memory
Vivid pain, replying psychotically
It only gets worse as
The oak clock ticks away
Similar to the effort
To fall asleep
When sleep bashes your mind
With the changing of the hours
2 to 3 to 4 am
Difficulty as
Automatic as breathing
Unlabored
Tormenting
Until you learn
Forgiveness
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2005-05-31 03:07:32]
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Re: Guilty
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by Tanmaya on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 03:39:03 AM AEST
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A very meaningful write... concise and impressive. The ending is great.
Very well-expressed.
Hope to read more of your work. |
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Re: Guilty
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by kareless on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 08:33:03 AM AEST
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I thought that was excellent. It seems that the forgiveness is of oneself...
I love the structure; you put me there..somewhere. Not easy, I'm impressed!
Good job!
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