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“Collage”
Contributed by
andSHEbled__xx
on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 07:30:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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On my wall there hangs a collage
Of the time we spent together
Pictures and quotes
Reminding me forever
Through a simple snap shot
True happiness is shown
And when I think about the good times
I no longer feel alone
Looking at these pictures
Love seems so real
There was a beauty between us
That nothing could conceal
I’ve done everything I can
To hide the way I feel
But now there’s a brokenness
That not even time could heal
Copyright ©
andSHEbled__xx
... [
2005-05-30 19:30:40]
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Re: “Collage”
(User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 08:01:51 PM AEST
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hrm, well i like ths all around really, good structure and rhyme, a good Poem, nicely done..
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Re: “Collage”
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by Tanmaya on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 04:01:12 AM AEST
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The poem has a good flow and lucid style.
Nice work...keep writing.
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