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Heaven On Earth
Contributed by
xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx
on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 06:47:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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High waves roaming
Like white horses running
Leaving marks in the sand
Water touching me toes
As the waves roam
I am staring at the horizon
Searching out in the distance
Longing for a word
A message in a bottle:
"If love is forever, Can we live in eternity
And never return, Like white horses running
On pearly like beaches, Leaving the trails of life
Forever hold you dear, In this kingdom called
heaven on earth....."
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xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx
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2005-05-30 18:47:58]
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Re: Heaven On Earth
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by persia on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 07:03:00 PM AEST
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Yeah it dont hurt to dream a little!
great poem it was like i was actually there!
Great poem
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Re: Heaven On Earth
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 07:12:09 PM AEST
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Nice imagery there Nats...I could really picture this as I was reading. Nicely done.
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Re: Heaven On Earth
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 07:20:47 PM AEST
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This is so lovely. I could visualize standing in the sand with the white foam playing around toes. See the fiddler crabs roaming the beach. Lovely scene in my mind from your lovely poem. You just keep writing, my dear. You are doing very well.
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Re: Heaven On Earth
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 10:37:08 AM AEST
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Without dreams we are just robots, drifting aimlessly through life.
Keep on dreaming !!!
Steve |
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Re: Heaven On Earth
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by SocialMisfit on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 03:10:17 AM AEST
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nice imagry,good flow and a good topic, you made a pice of art here, and its a good one :D
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Re: Heaven On Earth
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 01:16:18 AM AEST
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Wow, another inspring dream filled with wonderful imagery; flowing right along. That was simply awesome.
Thank you for taking us into your brilliant dream made with a wonderful heart & soul.
Huggggssss,
Tim
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