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my quiet moments
Contributed by
persia
on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 06:47:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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silence
can it be dangerous
and what if youre all alone
do you just fall deeper
or drift away,
everybody knows
that i cant offer you much
but i got a lot of love
and
im saving it up just for you
when you come
lately
i wonder if anyone notices
me
in my quiet moments
when i freeze in fear
of what is to come
and the thought that youre
just a dream
i freak myself out
but you kick me
back to reality
i guess i freak you out too!
sometimes
i miss where i was
but the sun is gonna shine
and you keep my will alive
i watch you grow
and i wish i could be that brave
you give me a lot of trouble
already!
i cant sit, walk or sleep for long
ive got you
but i feel so alone
in my quiet moments
i freeze in fear
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Re: my quiet moments
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 07:19:01 PM AEST
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such a beautifully human poem, i believe we all have these feelings:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: my quiet moments
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by Ruby1987 on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 07:19:12 PM AEST
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dnt need 2 notice u cz i cn feel u! aint seen u in 4 months hpe ur alright!
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Re: my quiet moments
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 07:23:55 PM AEST
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Don't fear life. Just watch it closely. There is so much out there to learn.
Nice write,
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Re: my quiet moments
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 09:35:17 PM AEST
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Persia this is lovely poem about your quiet time. But when being quiet and contemplating on your self, try to think only positive thoughts, build yourself up and not down.
I really like your poem. It was smooth and guides your reader well. I hope you have a wonderfully safe year without any fear at all!
Warm love
Lovingcritters
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