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shattered dreams
Contributed by
bethers_is_my_baby
on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 02:32:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I try to be optimistic
about my future, but it seems
what Ive wanted my whole life
is falling apart right in front of me
i don't know when it happened
the minute or the day
i don't know when i threw
all my dreams away
the image was clear
but now the mirror has been shattered
shall i now wait seven years to be happy again?
when will i be able
to move on with my life?
nothing will ever be as it once was
this i know
but maybe in time
i will find a life
better than the one
i once knew
and all my shattered dreams
Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato
Copyright ©
bethers_is_my_baby
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2005-05-30 14:32:06]
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Re: shattered dreams
(User Rating: 1 )
by ruthie1983 on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 01:24:37 AM AEST
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| Good writing. Sometimes our dream always seem to not turn out the way we want. Just be patience and work through it. i enjoy ur poems. |
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Re: shattered dreams
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by seci on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 04:16:24 PM AEST
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life is only what you make it
maybe not fair but it calls for a time to sit
you can move on with your life if you try
why put yourself down
there are brighter days but you only choose to open one eye
your image to me is clear
you are sad and at times live in fear
don't make it as hard as it seems
put the pieces back together and find your dreams |
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Re: shattered dreams
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by xXcrossedXx on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 09:50:46 AM AEST
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I didn't like this one so much I didn't feel the flow. But good write, I love your writing so keep it up and I'll keep reading.
--amanda-- |
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