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Legacy
Contributed by
Jaycee
on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 11:30:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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They thought they were damned
he wasn't what they planned
the simplest of situations
he couldn't understand
the babe's out of the diaper
but he certaintly is hyper
he is so self-absorbed
marches to his own piper
kindergarten's a nightmare
he couldn't survive there
he toppled over his desks
parents start to despair
high school saw studies
'cause he had no buddies
kids waited in ambush and
he fights back and bloodies
there's a brief stint in college
pursuing computer knowledge
but falsely accused of cheating
lost his study privilege
he's sent into the workforce
and with parents divorce
he's ill equipped for this life
but they show no remorse
because he refuses to grow up
and their god to worship
his mom moves away and
dad returns to europe
then an angel fell from heaven
and his heart it did quicken
but she repudiated him
like he was the worst toxin
At various jobs, he's a joke
socially such a slowpoke
they think he's retarded
his employment they revoke
He gets married too fast
they all know it won't last
the divorce, it does come
and that life's in the past
Not until he sires a son
who's got a worse malfunction
they're both damaged goods
the legacy of this one
Copyright ©
Jaycee
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2005-05-30 11:30:15]
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Re: Legacy
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 02:17:00 PM AEST
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very sad... beautifully written... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Legacy
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 03:02:39 PM AEST
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Oh Jaycee!!!!
((((((hugs))))))
Sadly beautiful......
From one who has no legacy to leave behind!! |
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Re: Legacy
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 05:53:51 AM AEST
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Jaycee,
This poem is so sad it makes me want to give you a big ol hug!!! Nice flow and well written but you have alot to offer people and dont be so hard on your self
Leia |
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Re: Legacy
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 12:41:48 PM AEST
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| This was entirely moving, and I know someone who could tell a similar story. All of a life history encapsulated in one work. Nice job! J. |
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Re: Legacy
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by blue_angel on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 07:38:20 PM AEST
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oh so sad! please cheer up friend... i need you we all do. you're such a great person no matter the past... leave it behind you, make a new path.
live life to the fullest,
jennie* |
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