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My parallel universe :)
Contributed by
xx_lil_devilish_angel_xx
on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 09:36:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Serenity situated in a parallel universe filled with true beauty,
The rising Sun dances jovially across the afternoon skies,
Sheets of tranquility sounded by the chirpy chatter birds sing,
Peace unfolds gently like a lotus flower, pure bliss is what it brings.
Fairies frollick to and fro, utterly fearless of what life may bring,
Nature glides gracefully throughout the musky midnight skies,
Hopes and dreams become reality, let you fly away with your inhibitions,
Phantom like innocence overrides the evil spirits that once occured.
Elegant echoes of childrens laughter play a soulful tune in my head,
They galavant around carelessly regardless of what negativity may be due to come,
Perfect blue skies whistle the sounds of peacefulness in everybody's ears,
The sparkling stars at night glow with ambition, smiley in their appearance.
Two lovers lay on the green pastures of the hillside, exchanging their undying love,
Materialism is banished in this land for all it brings is greed and attitudes of the selfish,
The essence in the air overpowered by the sweet aroma of pure perfection,
Flawless in every way, a dream - like land people live in day to day.
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Re: My parallel universe :)
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by xx_lil_devilish_angel_xx on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 10:27:20 AM AEST
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Just a poem I thought of at the top of my head basically :) criticism is appreciated but if you could comment on my poem I would be truly grateful :)
Take care everyone,
Lots of love,
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Re: My parallel universe :)
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 11:15:48 AM AEST
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beautiful, lovely style flow and oh so enchanting... hugs n' love nessa
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