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WINDOW TO MY SOUL
Contributed by
Lovingcritters
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Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 12:50:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
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WINDOW TO MY SOUL
May there be candles in my window....
A light to my heart, my soul aglow.
N'er the light turn to darkness,
My heart never become callus.
Candles aglow in my window,
As evening shadows o'er my mourning grow.
Light turned to darkness when you went away.
My sunshine, you, set at midday.
Alone in the darkness of daybreak,
Contemplating my fate, as I berate!
If only, If only, If only.....
my faith had not been so great
Unrealistic hope n'er imagining my fate.
Your love will always warm my heart
Memories will keep us together
forever n'er part.
My windows shine from your radiance
Depth of my soul feels pleasance.
Created by
Lovingcritters
ConSue
May 30, 2005
"In this world full of pain and sorrow,
maybe once in a lifetime, you'll find someone who
will make you feel wonderful. Hang on to that
someone no matter what!"
~No Author found~
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Re: WINDOW TO MY SOUL
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by emystar on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 12:54:05 AM AEST
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Sad but great tribute to your luved one.
hugs,
yobrat,
emy |
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Re: WINDOW TO MY SOUL
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 01:02:59 AM AEST
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This was just so beautiful. ConSue this was just perfection in every single way.
Hugs,
Jane xx |
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Re: WINDOW TO MY SOUL
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 02:00:16 AM AEST
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this poem is immortal as it will mean something
to everyone who has ever lost a loved one..
ever..
beautiful saddness my friend
Billy |
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Re: WINDOW TO MY SOUL
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by venkat on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 02:29:51 AM AEST
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A lovely tribute to your loved one..though it it looks sad...God bless peace and happiness.
humbly..venkat |
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Re: WINDOW TO MY SOUL
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by NoSaint on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 10:30:10 AM AEST
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Splendid in its warmth...as long as you remember they are by your side
((((((((Connie Sue))))))))))
Shari |
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Re: WINDOW TO MY SOUL
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by bernard on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 10:56:44 AM AEST
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| Wonmderful tribute to a loved one that has moved on. We will meet again soon all of our loved ones. Bernard |
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Re: WINDOW TO MY SOUL
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 11:35:31 AM AEST
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so true, i know my mate will always live in my heart, although its hard; we are blessed connie girl, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: WINDOW TO MY SOUL
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 06:20:04 PM AEST
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This is so beautiful, Connie. Their light and love does live on in our hearts and souls, forever. One day we will be with them again and shall rejoice for it will be forever for sure.
Rita |
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Re: WINDOW TO MY SOUL
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by persia on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 06:52:56 PM AEST
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So much love and care!
i love the line
-Contemplating my fate, as I berate!
thankyou for sharing
persia |
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Re: WINDOW TO MY SOUL
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 02:07:14 AM AEST
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such warmth and so beautiful of a write.
you did a splendid job on this i love it.
big huggies |
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Re: WINDOW TO MY SOUL
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 05:33:58 PM AEST
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| What a wonderful feeling to leave behind! This was beautiful poetry. J. |
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