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twisted toughts with a twist
Contributed by
timmy2scoops
on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 09:57:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
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crazyness insane feelings.......wrote it a while back
they smoked acid
nothing lasted
its not real
my eggs are plastic
what did i do last night?
sold my brain
i crased it
broke brain
a ticket to the insane
sit back and watch the show
nobody saw it but i swear it snowed
child hood memories of g.i. joe's
feeling twisted
damn i'm thoed
back in tha flood
u stomped on it kid
this sacks a dud
i'm in 2 places at once
or i wish i was
let me try it
ok, go .....
o.g.'s we do it right
hittin those killa highs
the devils we summon
most don't see this dark side
the thoughts, the situation
the crazy revalations
the lack of sleep, the rushes
the reality vacations
comming down so hard
i've been so many places
my seritonan's mad at me
he packed his suitcases
alice in wonder land
depression setting in
boxing with temtation
but he always seems to win
its like fighting a grown man
and your olny 10
born again, win
lose your close friends
the power of forgiveness is as if u never sinned
hold up high ur chin
2 places at once
the good and the bad
choose to be happy
or screwed up and sad
their i did it, so i'm not crazy
goodbye their people
i'll end this with another
doopty do dangle
dippa doe dee
darn it
darrren's demons
damaged da drugs
daredevil dummys
doing dangerous deeds
destracted, decieved
dinkleberry dope
would u like 2 get high
i think i'd say nope
after reading this
its hard
but their is still hope!!
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2005-05-29 21:57:57]
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Re: twisted toughts with a twist
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by suicidal_imbecile on
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Re: twisted toughts with a twist
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Re: twisted toughts with a twist
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 12:41:21 AM AEST
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Tim it's so good to see you post a new poem again. You already know what i think of your poems right?
Well just incase you forgot, i think your a great writer with his own words and thoughts on how everything is and you write with a lot of rhymes whch is really really good. (Did i make any sense?)
Anyways thanks for sharing your poems again.
Jane xx |
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