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Dream
Contributed by
tissueshaveissues
on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 04:42:55 PM in AEST
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Dark to light and light to Dark
the end of the Story always too far
The cold rooms chill on a Summers Day
the crying children as they play
my thoughts and feelings intertwined
the pain inside I cannot hide
16 candles on the cake
a lifetime of happiness that is fake
what you see is never what you get
broken goods is what you said
So hollow inside I’m barely there
you left me here without a care
Sing me a song a glorious song
as I fall asleep
Take me to my favorite place
A place where I’m never alone
Sunshine pours on me all the time
The Princess gets her prince
Laughter and innocence never fade
And from this place I’ll never wake
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Re: Dream
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by Doriens_Picture on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 05:51:48 PM AEST
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your screen names hard to say
other than that this is a great and very sad write |
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Re: Dream
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 07:35:54 PM AEST
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Pretty good write...As I was reading it, it was playing sort of like a song. I like it.
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Re: Dream
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by sprinter27 on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 09:10:17 PM AEST
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great poem!!! i like it a lot! even though it's sad. please don't go to sleep and never wake up. i wouldn't like that, we'd lose a good writer! keep up the good work!!
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