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Help Me
Contributed by
blue_angel
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Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 04:06:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Chained to the feeling of death and despair
I’m stuck in hell, can’t get out of there
I’m sending chills down my own spine
Surrounded by demons and evil divine
Slipping back to addiction, temptations of old
Coming back to my pain, returning to cold
From up above someone send me a rope
Send me some strength, a blister of hope
Someone please help me, I’m falling out
Cleaving to weakness and hanging on doubt
Recognize this as a call for help
I can no longer fend for myself
Please notice my self-righteous suicide
Someone stop me cuz I failed when I tried
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Re: Help Me
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 04:10:13 PM AEST
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Hey sweetie, hang in there, and don't give into temptation. You're doing sooo good......
You know you can always pm me. This was a good write by the way...Very honest.
Scorp. |
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Re: Help Me
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by tissueshaveissues on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 04:57:35 PM AEST
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| This poem clearly shows emotion and has a natural flow to it... very well written. |
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Re: Help Me
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by Doriens_Picture on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 05:56:43 PM AEST
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my failure count is like 20 since i was thirteen i tried to hang my self earlier this year but the rope snappend and left a mark on my neck i went a way alittle but if someone looks close enough they can still see the mark
i know its hard to hear but things will get better that i can almost promise you
hang in there and try to find something to keepo your mind
safe from pain and hurt and tourment
and free from inflicted punishment |
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Re: Help Me
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by sprinter27 on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 09:03:49 PM AEST
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good write.... but NO, jennie!!! don't try it or think about it! it's a horrible thing! we are friends! we gotta stick together! and don't use me as an example. i may not tell you anything... but i'm srtong enough to fight temptation. fighting by myself works for now. but you can talk to me!!!!! really DO!!! you can't leave me to live in hell by myself. we are dying alone together. remember? plz don't leave me jennie! if i have to make you talk, i might start talking to get you to so. plz jennie! don't leave me! please!!!! DON'T!!!!! you can always count on me.... PM, phone, email, and in person! talk to me! use me!!! please, jennie!! good poem, but i don't like the meaning behind it.
~sprints |
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Re: Help Me
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by Jaycee on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 01:13:46 AM AEST
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Jennie
First, the rope is here. Any strength that I have... it is yours. Anything I can do, please just ask. I fervently hope that you can best these demons, like you have been doing so well and for so long. I know it's not easy to resist temptation but the consequence for failing to is to fall back into your addiction, as you call it. Oh, I know you know this, you said it in your poem. I want to stop you but you're so far away! Please, take advantage of sprints offer. She's close by and wants to help!!! And you can do this, have been doing it. A well written poem, to be sure, but one I hoped never to read again. If you need someone, please PM and we'll come runnin' with rope.
Jaycee |
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Re: Help Me
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by sride686 on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 10:18:42 AM AEST
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| Very well written with so much pain and a dark ending that puts fear and pain in the readers mind. I enjoyed this write a lot but I’m sorry to hear you have so much pain. My thoughts are with you my good friend and I’m always here for you. Take care and keep up the writes and let all this pain release from your soul….Steve |
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