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White Death
Contributed by
living_dead_girl
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Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 01:06:06 PM in AEST
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Red tear drops fall from my wrist
Staining the pure, white snow
I lie here in the cold
Awaiting the Grim Reaper's visit
I will leave this body to freeze in the snow
As my soul wanders on
When dawn breaks upon the city
My lifeless corpse will be found
Some will laugh as others cry
Some will start to wonder why
Why did I take my own life
What drove me to choose this fate
I cried all my tears
Both clear & red
My body cold, red tear drops drained
Now my spirit wanders in this winter wonderland
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Re: White Death
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by bethers_is_my_baby on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 02:10:14 PM AEST
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wow! great poem!! i loved it!! its beautifull!:)
*~peace and love~* |
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Re: White Death
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 03:38:48 PM AEST
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This is a great write! You showed your emotions really well with this....
Scorp. |
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Re: White Death
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by givingin on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 12:35:05 PM AEST
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Good poem.
It sent souch a beautiful image of white and red as they mix.
It was quiuet sad though.
Short, but sweet.
Good write!
*~givingin~* |
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Re: White Death
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 08:38:47 PM AEST
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Love the flow of this one
well done |
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Re: White Death
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 09:40:53 PM AEST
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| Hey gurl this is my fav. poems of yours well see ya tomorrow @ that youth thangy lol Love ya sissy,becca Oh yea and did i mention how much I LOVE this poem its AWSOME!!!!!!! |
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