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Roses of Pain
Contributed by
sride686
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Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 01:05:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Roses are red
From the blood that was shed
As they lay on the graves
Of those that are dead
Their thorns will cut me
And with pain will I bleed
For my life and my love
Were taken from me
Roses, Roses
I’ll continue to cry
Whenever I see them
My heart will die
Roses, Roses
That kiss my lips
When I smell their sweet sent
A life will be missed
Copyright ©
sride686
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2005-05-29 13:05:10]
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Re: Roses of Pain
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by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 01:21:49 PM AEST
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A very touching poem for a friend and guardian....
May the angels watch over you and your friends.
Nats. |
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Re: Roses of Pain
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by happybunnyfan on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 01:35:28 PM AEST
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| it was really good. just by reading it i now know how you feel. i have a friend in Iraq. i know i to would be sad if any thing were to happen to him |
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Re: Roses of Pain
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by bethers_is_my_baby on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 02:14:57 PM AEST
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wow! this is beautifull!!! great work! :)
*~peace and love~* |
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Re: Roses of Pain
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 03:35:34 PM AEST
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Oh wow Steve! You've got yourself a masterpiece here....A shame what inspired this awesome write though. Again, I'm truly sorry to hear about your friend....Take care.
Scorp. |
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Re: Roses of Pain
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by Doriens_Picture on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 03:54:57 PM AEST
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| i know that loss to well i lost a friend last year and hope not to lose anymore i have alot of close friends there and i hope they come back safe same goes for you |
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Re: Roses of Pain
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by deepviolet on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 04:25:25 PM AEST
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| i'm so sorry about your friend. unfortunate as it is, death is one of the best reasons to write poetry. here you've given a great example. i hope letting out some of your pain has helped you to grieve. good luck. |
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Re: Roses of Pain
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 05:59:12 PM AEST
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a truely beautiful dedication, im so sorry for your loss.... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Roses of Pain
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by suicidal_imbecile on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 11:31:59 AM AEST
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This is truly a wonderful poem steve, i loved it.
Love Lots
kate |
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Re: Roses of Pain
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 01:36:31 PM AEST
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I am so sorry for your loss...and can only imagine how difficult it is for all of you there..
Great write..and I hope you all make it back home safely..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Roses of Pain
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by hardrocker15198916 on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 08:50:23 PM AEST
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| im so sorry about your friend. this poem is beautiful and even though it was short it made me cry |
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