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Stabbed in the Heart
Contributed by
jyssvw
on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 01:02:39 PM in AEST
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Let us start the bidding
To the richest raiser
Go the winnings
Selling my heart
On the black market
All are welcome
To take a stab at it
Going, gone, you earned your rights
Take what you’ve won and run, run
Far from my sight, my periphery
Far from my reach,
My velocity
Oh the tenacity!
Placed in the precise trajectory
Aimed at my heart, precisely
Literally
Incredulously!
Still beating and intact
My heart begins to shrink
And becomes compact
No longer capable
Of making its comeback
No longer acceptable
Or approved
Methods of conduct
A typical Freudian construct
Asymmetrical
Frictional mishap,
Happenings
Arteries transport blue blood
Finally collapse
Let the bidder
With the most to offer
Step down the isle
And state her claim
Let she not be fooled
By the very nature
Of a heartfelt game
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jyssvw
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2005-05-29 13:02:39]
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Re: Stabbed in the Heart
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 01:20:54 PM AEST
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Jyss, this is beautiful but oh so tragic...Just a thought; maybe you should try giving your heart away, instead of selling it...Good luck with that. May the highest bidder win!! lol
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Re: Stabbed in the Heart
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by deepviolet on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 04:21:02 PM AEST
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| wow i feel your pain. the emotion here is great too. i hope your heart gets into the hands of a kind soul. |
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