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Closing Doors
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 12:43:48 PM in AEST
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Brand new day; here I am for more
even though my emotions you ripped and tore
Sadist I may be, but devil I'm not
(you think this rhyme's about you, but it's not!)
tales I'm spinning, so make sure to catch the plot
questions and confusion are all I've got....
A fragile flower extended, but left for dead
I ran down some stairs and jumped what I said
my life's so messed up---if only you knew....
the pain and the suffering that I've been through
You didn't want to listen; that's your prerogative
but if you're out for blood, leave me be, and my life I'll live.
Copyright ©
hauntedscorp
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2005-05-29 12:43:48]
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Re: Closing Doors
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by jyssvw22 on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 12:53:23 PM AEST
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hey scorp this is a masterpiece, and it really hits home...i have a feeling that mabey there was a miscommunication with that person somewhere along the lines, and if given the chance that person would love to listen and try again....but hey thats just my Cockeyed Analysis.......
nice write ...
always a freind :) |
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Re: Closing Doors
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by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 01:15:02 PM AEST
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A lot of people barely truly listen to others on what they have to say. Which leads into confusion and mistakes to the spoken word.
A shame really......
Very nicely written,
Huggsss,
Nats. |
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Re: Closing Doors
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by sride686 on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 01:52:23 PM AEST
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| Wow my friend what a great write and it was worded so clever. A great write full of so much pain and it has a much deeper side to it I can feel it. Thank you for your comments on my work and I’m glad I took time to read this write. You write so well and always show so much emotion. I love your style keep it up my friend. Bye for now….Steve |
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Re: Closing Doors
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by Zeldianus on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 02:10:24 PM AEST
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This is a good poem. I relate to what you say here by my own personal experience. I am sorry to hear of your misfortune :( Things will get better, they always do before the end.
Hugs,
Seth |
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Re: Closing Doors
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 05:59:42 PM AEST
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Rave on, Scorp. Venting frustation and emotions is healthy for you. Saves your heatlh later on.
Rita |
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Re: Closing Doors
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 10:57:14 PM AEST
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A straight from the heart via the gut peice i
enjoy this write, especially the mood i'm in
great feeling and expression of emotions . . .
Benedetto John Papa |
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Re: Closing Doors
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 07:07:08 AM AEST
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| I must say, Scorp, you rant very very well. Love this one!!! |
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Re: Closing Doors
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by sprinter27 on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 07:48:48 PM AEST
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awesome piece, scorp. i like how you let the emotion flow (and kept it rhyming). awesome work here, i have to say.
keep up the good work!
~sprints |
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Re: Closing Doors
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by In_a_while on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 02:05:13 PM AEST
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| Very cool write and written with such venom that i like it too much! dw |
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