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Daddy Haiku
Contributed by
EndEformEtrancE
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Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 10:00:00 AM in AEST
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My dearest father,
How I’ve longed for this for years
Now you see my tears
They’ve always been here,
In words rather than liquid.
Meet the real me now.
Copyright ©
EndEformEtrancE
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2003-01-02 10:00:00]
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Re: Daddy Haiku
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by Ramfire on
Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 01:50:05 PM AEST
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Makes me feel sad. Nicely written.
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Re: Daddy Haiku
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by AzurePaladin on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 11:32:15 AM AEST
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| So few lines can say so much... Sad, that seems to happen a lot, where two really don't know each other like they should... It is good though, almost ending on a positive note, "meet the real me now". Nice write! |
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Re: Daddy Haiku
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by okokjazz on
Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 08:09:58 AM AEST
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| this is beautiful...what more can i say?! |
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