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Broken heart
Contributed by
oceandreamer
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Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 11:06:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A Broken heart and shattered dreams... Dreams of a beautiful tomorrow, a future that knows no sorrow… Love, laughter and moonlight nights, star cluttered skies… heavens lights. We had it all and through it away. A love larger than life…don’t let it fall. Maybe someday… you’ll realize, what it could have been… should you have stayed.
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Re: Broken heart
(User Rating: 1 ) by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 11:46:48 AM AEST (User
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This is a sad write, but well done. Short, but summed up well. But....one small thing; "through" should be "threw".
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Re: Broken heart
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sahara on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 01:58:19 PM AEST (User
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Nice write, straight to the point. I think sums up the way the majority of us have felt at one time or another.
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