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Dont give up
Contributed by
poetrygirl1991
on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 09:15:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Live life to its fullest, cuz there are people around the world dying everyday to save your life.
There are firefighters, running into burning buildings, a few dying off here and there
Don t yew dare try to end your life with a slash of a knife.
Keep going , so your family wont wonder why yew arent there
There are people around the world getting into dangerous situations,
why end your life when yew have tons of people that care bout yew
Who cares how much money yew make , or what size yew are, or even your weight
yew need to at least give life a chance even if yew only have a small life to live, cuz yew kno yew wont make it past a year or two,
Wouldn't yew rather be able to remember times, the old and new
Would'nt yew want people to see the difference yew made in this world,
Yew might've done a few things wrong, by why give up, yew may not be able to change what has already happened, just try to prevent similar things from happening in the future.
Yew are only granted one life, why not live it to it fullest.
So dont give up, try your best to survive, and always remember yew only have one life,
why not live it, yew can change the world but it takes time...
Do your best, work hard, have fun, live a little and dont give up. keep holding on,
you have tons of people in this world that care bout yew, yew maynot realize it, but they really look up to yew, they forgive yew for the smallest and largest things.
But if yew ever killed yourself, how would they be able to forgive yew, if they'll never be able to see yew again.
Dont give up!
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Re: Dont give up
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by mylady on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 11:52:29 AM AEST
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| Lfe is hard every one struggle in life.. nice poem |
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Re: Dont give up
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by Shishke_Bob on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 08:37:34 PM AEST
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this was a poem that was told with truth and relevance. all, that you have said is true and should be knowen to all for it would save many, (take joy in knowing that you might have saved some people here.) I do hope that you never have to know what its like to loss someone like this. hope to read more from you later. God bless.
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Re: Dont give up
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by blossomingcherry5353 on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 10:27:26 PM AEST
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That was an awesome poem! so much emotion, I liked the repetition of the word yew. It made it really interesting to read. I hope more people read this, it shows more than not comitting suicide, it also shows that you shouldn't care about physical features. Thanks for sharing.
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