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A Girl In Bloom
Contributed by
xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx
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Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 03:50:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Bloom little girl
As your petals unfold
Flowering so boldly
By the touch of Spring
Surrounded by butterflies
Gently caressing your skin
Shine ever so bright
Like the golden rays of sun
Bloom little girl
So sweet like a daisy
In a field of wonders and hopes
Rambling roses wandering
Out into the open world
Ever so curious and fond
For the long road ahead
Grow high above ground
Like the tree of life so inviting
Bloom little girl
With love and kindness
Filling your tender heart
May the road before you
Be fullfilling and sweet
A journey ever so filled
With memories to keep
Those are me wishes
For a girl in bloom.....
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xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx
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2005-05-29 03:50:03]
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Re: A Girl In Bloom
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 04:08:10 AM AEST
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| good poem from a good poet I like it a lot ..keep writing coz you've got talent,,,thankes for the comment |
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by emystar on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 04:09:29 AM AEST
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Very beautifull write that unfolds like a rose.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: A Girl In Bloom
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 06:46:30 AM AEST
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| really vivid and descriptive. nice write. |
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Re: A Girl In Bloom
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 07:24:37 AM AEST
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This was one well written piece. This poem reminds me of my earlier poems that i wrote.
I think this was great, thanks for sharing it.
Jane xxx |
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Re: A Girl In Bloom
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by bethers_is_my_baby on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 07:25:34 AM AEST
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| beautifull poem!!! great job!!! |
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Re: A Girl In Bloom
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 11:31:28 AM AEST
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Aww Nats! What a sweet write. Lucky for her, she has someone as kind as you for a friend. Very nice poem; I liked this.
Scorp. |
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Re: A Girl In Bloom
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 06:17:48 PM AEST
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There is nothing sweeter than watching a young girl bloom into a beautiful flower. Lovely lovely write.
Rita |
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Re: A Girl In Bloom
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by xx_lil_devilish_angel_xx on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 04:17:02 AM AEST
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A really sweet poem, very touching. The image of a little girl blossoming like a rose throughout life is truly inspiring and captures the moment perfectly, great choice of imagery.
Keep writing, you indeed have a great talent :)
Take care,
Lots of love,
xx_lil_devilish_angel_xx
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Re: A Girl In Bloom
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 10:29:45 AM AEST
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A lovely and touching weaving of words.
Like the petals of the rose your thoughts for your her unfold before us.
Well done
Steve |
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Re: A Girl In Bloom
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 04:30:24 AM AEST
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What an absolute wonderful and beautiful poem for what seems to be a wonderful and beautiful little girl from a wonderful and beautiful poet.
Your heart is so incredibly kind and loving.
Another masterpiece.
Thank you for sharing.
Hugggsss,
Tim
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