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Senses
Contributed by
BrwnEyedGirl7
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Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 01:37:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Your voice repeats inside my head
I still can't wash the smell of you off me
I can't close my eyes
Cause a vivid image of you
appears out of no where
And somehow I can feel your touch when the summer wind blows
It's like you haven't left me
But inside I know things aren't the same...
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BrwnEyedGirl7
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2005-05-29 01:37:39]
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Re: Senses
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by Sinned on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 07:07:55 AM AEST
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BrwnEyedGirl7
If only if only you took time
Thought of a couple rymes
This poem would read smooth
Your emotions really come through
Keep writing you have good ideas
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Re: Senses
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by mylady on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 08:02:30 AM AEST
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| Very nice poem.... mylady |
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Re: Senses
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by reflections on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 12:15:21 PM AEST
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The ability to capture past moments can be both satisfying and painful. As you grow older the enjoyable outweighs the agonizing. When you get real old even the hurtful memories can bring back memorable reflections. Keep writing, so you’ll have a lot of memories to read, and relive, when you do get to where you’re going. You write well . . . that is a gift to yourself, as well as others. Good luck
John
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