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Consequence
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 11:19:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My skin is shivering
And it’s not even cold
My tears don’t stop
But I’ve never been
So overjoyed
My life is glowing
As if for the first time in
My whole life
I am out of the darkness
My soul has taken wing
And it has not left me
I have all I want
But still want more
More of that smile
More of those eyes
That remind me of
Heaven, of rapture
My skin feels yours
As if remembering a dream
And I cannot get enough
Now or ever
Of that more than gorgeous voice
That voice you hide because you are so shy
I can write like I never have before
I can feel things I never though possible
And I know it is you
You are the only one that can do this to me
Everything that I am now
Is of consequence of you
I start to think about you
And it is not enough
So m y mind turns my thoughts into a dream
And I have to close my eyes
So I can have that dream of you
I am the best I have ever been
And it is because you trusted me
And let me see your wings
You let me know you cry
You let me know you dream of me
I see in you more beauty
Than any one has ever seen
More than in the entire in world
I am whole for the first time
And it is because I have you
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Doriens_Picture
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2005-05-28 23:19:57]
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Re: Consequence
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 12:08:05 AM AEST
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| Ummm...Ben, could you do me a favour? Could you put this into a handout for all guys to read and abide?? lol Seriously, this was beautiful, as always...Well thought out and well worded. Scorp. |
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Re: Consequence
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by emystar on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 02:39:39 AM AEST
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Tired of your sappy luv write. Never!!
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Consequence
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by NoSaint on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 06:58:55 AM AEST
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I am with Emy, I for one will not tire of your sappy love writes ...
Shari |
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Re: Consequence
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by Doriens_Picture on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 05:21:48 PM AEST
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I Am John Nathaniel Lemus Son of Dionicio Lemus Great Great Great 8 Grandson Of the First Sons Of the Unicorn and I love the Daughter of the lady of the sword
I was also known as the Pen Dragon Angel but ppl never got that |
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Re: Consequence
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 06:04:18 PM AEST
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*sigh*.. hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Consequence
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by Gothchyk on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 05:33:38 PM AEST
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| I also will never tire of hearing your words of love, they are amazing, and always bring warm feelings with them. Great write. |
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Re: Consequence
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by sweetoccasion29 on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 05:19:09 PM AEST
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| HOW COULD YOU BE MISTAKEN 4 BEN WELL THATS AN ENGIMA |
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