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This is how I hurt
Contributed by
all_the_dead_roses
on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 11:19:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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When you say you love me
with your eyes towards your nose
this is how I hurt
when i look at you and
then see tears on my clothes
this how I hurt
I look into your eyes
now empty and bland
there is a child inside
ready to be a man
this is how I hurt
when my heart skips a beat
now shatteres and repeats
this is how I hurt
not knowing how
you feel inside
when you don't notice my smiles
and most of all my cries
THIS IS HOW I HURT
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Re: This is how I hurt
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by Doriens_Picture on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 11:22:42 PM AEST
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This is an amazing write and i can relate to it all to well i love it but i love more these lines coz i have been in this position more than once in my past
when my heart skips a beat
now shatteres and repeats
this is how I hurt
not knowing how
you feel inside
when you don't notice my smiles
and most of all my cries
THIS IS HOW I HURT |
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Re: This is how I hurt
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 12:16:29 AM AEST
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I love this piece. I've felt like this too many times before as well...
You did a great job expressing your emotions. Nice work. |
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