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Three Short Poems
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 10:04:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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1: At first sight
At first sight
Frozen in silence
Can’t speak one
One single word
I am overwhelmed
Now, for always
Head over heals
Fallen in love
Submerged in tears
Tears of Joy
For I have
Truly found beauty
And it is
In your eyes
2: In this for the long run
In sadness
In joy
With fear
With out
For today
For tomorrow
For after
For ever
In sickness
In health
When ever
What ever
In warmth
In cold
In summer
In winter
Even autumn
Even spring
You know
I am
In this
For the
Long run
3: Tears
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Re: Three Short Poems
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by waos on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 10:26:40 PM AEST
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The 2nd one was definitely my favorite, though the 3rd one was kind of
neat to see. I think they were all adorable, and you rock that you
think of someone so sweetly and work at expressing it!!
I've learned not to take that for granted!!!
Nice work!
~Kara |
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Re: Three Short Poems
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 12:33:00 AM AEST
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| All of these poems are so sweet. The first one was so sincere...the second one was my favorite. Really great. I liked the structure of the last one. Awesome work. |
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Re: Three Short Poems
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by emystar on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 03:10:41 AM AEST
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good work, friend.
veru creative.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Three Short Poems
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by NoSaint on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 07:01:39 AM AEST
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So very wonderful, good to see a guy madly in love w/ his wife...And not afraid to tell the world
Shari |
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Re: Three Short Poems
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by Gothchyk on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 05:41:06 PM AEST
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| scilence is sometimes golden, for your eyes will say all that is needed to be heard. Sometimes the seasons overlap eachother just hearts do, all times that will be cherished. Tears can be caught and wiped away, but joy is one thing that will stay. |
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