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Inside Out

Contributed by juliette on Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 08:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I was always waiting for you to slow down
Take some time to see the situation –
I’m standing back here watching you falling through,
You never were fond of hesitation-
And my advice – you never took twice,
You had to go it all your way-
What about the heart you left me holding out to you,
My token of love – I always knew the truth.
You need to run if there is space allowed,
And you can’t handle loving me out loud.
And nothing’s changed, I don’t feel different now
You just keep on turning me inside out..

You say I should remember our better days,
Before time beat you at your own game,
And I stepped out of sight,
Instead of hanging around to mouth the words good-bye.
I just let you fly –
Isn’t that what you wanted me to do?
Bitterness consumes me now, to think of you
The core of me splits into two –
The half that wants what I always did,
And the half that knows I could never live your life….
But nothing’s changed, oh no, I don’t feel different now
You just keep on turning me inside out.

Copyright Â© juliette ... [ 2003-01-02 08:20:00]
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Re: Inside Out (User Rating: 1 )
by cryingonmyporch on Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 01:42:45 AM AEST
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I like inside out. It has a lot of feeling in it. And if this happened i am sorry! And I do hope things get better!
Always
Amy

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