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In the Sun's Reflection
Contributed by
blue_angel
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Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 09:14:17 PM in AEST
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I see the sun rise in the sky
The reflection framed in my eyes
The fire burning in my heart
Set for my life to start
I am finally feeling good
Feeling just the way I should
I’m not afraid to admit it now
I’m happy though I can’t say how
I’m not in denial anymore
I only wish I realized before
Even living in black and white
You can paint your world bright
If you just let go of the past
If you just let the feeling last
You can still cry and still be sad
Just let the good overrule the bad
Have fun when you have the chance
Don’t sit down get up and dance
I’ve experienced a revolution
And therefore this is my resolution
I have come to a new point of view
I dedicate this philosophy to you
I don’t feel bad for feeling good
I can feel like this and always could
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blue_angel
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2005-05-28 21:14:17]
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Re: In the Sun's Reflection
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by Jaycee on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 09:22:01 PM AEST
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Jennie, this is just an awesome poem. I love it! This poem is just so full of life and confidence and hope. And so well written. I'm trying to think about what parts of the poem I like best, but they are equally fantastic! It is such a good poem, and there is also good avice in it, like:
If you just let go of the past
If you just let the feeling last
You can still cry and still be sad
Just let the good overrule the bad
Adversity will come, but with this attitude gets you through it. For you, personally, I like the last:
I don’t feel bad for feeling good
I can feel like this and always could
That is something I have always wanted you to feel since I have met you. Bravo! Bravo! I could not be happier for you and this poem!
Jaycee
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Re: In the Sun's Reflection
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by poet70 on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 09:24:08 PM AEST
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GREAT!!!!! I loved it, good job, keep it up, don't stop writing poems, and don't ever be afraid to write about your emotions
Tammi |
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Re: In the Sun's Reflection
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 09:28:10 PM AEST
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This is such a beautiful and positive poem.. Great write..Keep it up....(the happiness too)
Jenni |
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Re: In the Sun's Reflection
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by Jaycee on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 09:30:35 PM AEST
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Really great! Did I mention that? Oh, a fab poem! Here's something for ya!
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Re: In the Sun's Reflection
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 12:26:04 AM AEST
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| Wow! I love this so much. It's so positive and well written. Five stars from me. :-) |
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Re: In the Sun's Reflection
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by Sinned on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 08:57:04 PM AEST
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Blue_angel
I have never heard the sound of the sun on a rose.
Not until today when I read this poem
Blue_angel---Beautiful
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Re: In the Sun's Reflection
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by Tanmaya on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 02:34:02 AM AEST
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Great work!
Holding wisdom and joy, that is often hidden, and yet is revealed to hearts that truly see.
I'm glad to read a positive write, which is rare among the poems here. |
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