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The Sky Above
Contributed by
poet70
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Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 08:51:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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The sky, with white clouds
So blue, so clam, beautiful
It’s just amazing
By: Tammi Pitman
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2005-05-28 20:51:41]
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Re: The Sky Above
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by Ripper_Something_Unusual on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 09:22:56 PM AEST
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i like it... haikus must be the hardest things to write...but you pulled it off...Well done.
Ripper
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Re: The Sky Above
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by OnAngelswings on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 10:00:50 PM AEST
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| Tammy...I am not even sure what this type poetry is but it must be pretty if its anything like this...I like it...Shari :) |
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Re: The Sky Above
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 12:11:23 AM AEST
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You are getting better all the time. Keep working on them. Clam needs to be changed to calm and generally you won't find punctuation in a haiku or contractions. I feel like all I do is burst your balloons. I am so sorry.
Rita |
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