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fondly by pond departure
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 08:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Sitting by the pond shivering my long pants on
have enjoyed it long enough no need to go on,
am looking into the cattails and seeing my life
freezing my toes off writing pen on a paper's life,
knowing what I've lived for an' aye been to many
buffet through the winter's chill snowflakes many,
oh, imagination carry me please on wings far away
nevermind she changed her mind and wishes to stay.
Stop looking into waters full of crystal mellow glare
mesmerizing fascinating would it hurt to die that way,
progress toward settling in the world bloody birds sing
recluse out in frozen weeds scandal mad mind's things,
evenings when forests go to resting filled with wild deer
will anyone hear my heart stop or venture even to care,
definate departure me by within' the mornings lights
temporal prosperity naturally alligned in worthy sight.
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2003-01-02 08:00:00]
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Re: fondly by pond departure
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 09:30:57 AM AEST
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| well done. i like it a LOT! |
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Re: fondly by pond departure
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by spooky on
Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 06:36:27 PM AEST
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| beautiful concept,, well written,,hope your new year will be a great one,,thank you my friend |
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Re: fondly by pond departure
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by nomad on
Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 05:27:10 PM AEST
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Oh Lady Fawn. This is so beautiful. I love your images and thoughts you create. Look forward to reading more of your delightful poems.
Your writing friend, William(Nomad) |
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Re: fondly by pond departure
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by Kie on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 11:06:05 AM AEST
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| The imagery you paint in my mind is like watching an artist slowly paint in watercolors. Seeing the images evolve and transform and becoming totally smitten. I love your poems Nessa...Kie |
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Re: fondly by pond departure
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by Cynthia on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 09:02:13 PM AEST
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| Nessa, my dear friend, your poems are wonderful. I have enjoyed reading them. *S* Cynthia |
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