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because she banged
Contributed by
imsorryulied
on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 08:13:43 PM in AEST
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She knows what she's got
uses that to make them hot
loves em and leaves em
does nothing but seize them
But they never learn
in time they return
to what they left behind
when she made them blind
the one who loved them more
lied alone in pain and torture
all the love they once had
is all gone and left cold, SAD????
He had to have what she sold
sad sad story that is getting old
he at one time had a love to hold
but left her alone to turn cold
one day he'll see her and the other
and wish he was still her lover
all things have now changed
because he wanted a girl that banged
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Re: because she banged
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by shelby on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 08:22:10 PM AEST
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Ill welcome you to YPDC its nice to have you with us. This was a powerful poem I enjoyed it and relate to this men have this problem with getting side tracked and following fake light shame on them
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Re: because she banged
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by emystar on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 08:26:57 PM AEST
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Welcome.
Very good writer u r.
Awesome write!
huggs,
emy |
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Re: because she banged
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 08:43:23 PM AEST
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| Great write! Welcome to the site...I look forward to reading more of your work very soon! :-) |
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Re: because she banged
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 08:53:11 PM AEST
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Men can be dogs. Chalk it up to male hormones. They think with their zippers. This is great, great, great. I will be looking for more from you. I also would like to welcome you to YPDC, the best poetry site on the web.
Smiles,
Rita |
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Re: because she banged
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 08:57:42 PM AEST
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Welcome and by the looks of what i'm
reading your off 2 a good start, but frankly
worry not about being liked, your poetry
speaks 4 itself, and your heart speaks
4 u . . .
Ben
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Re: because she banged
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 12:21:14 AM AEST
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| what do you mean by banged?...help me understand the poem |
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