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Silent Lover
Contributed by
LonelyDork
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Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 07:09:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I remember the day you said you loved me,
Now you say our love can't be,
You gathered all of your love and took it back,
and when you did that I felt my heart being axed ,
Now your with someone else,
and i'm just outside your heart by myself,
my heart gets crushed when it sees you with him,
that it feel being ripped apart and thrown in a trash bin,
But your happy and feel loved and that's all that matters,
that i can't help my eyes begin to water,
Because that's all that i ever wanted to make you feel,
and if your happy then im happy for you that i'll make a deal,
A deal with myself to keep loving you but i wont show it or tell you,
so that you can be happy with him and your love stays true,
I will try to interfere as little as I can, but i will keep loving you,
and hoping you'll come back, until then i'll be your silent lover.
Copyright ©
LonelyDork
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2005-05-28 19:09:30]
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Re: Silent Lover
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by somedaylove on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 07:15:17 PM AEST
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| Sigh.........So much emotion i can relate to this write..........I feel for you and pray that someday you will be silenced no more.............. great write keep it up |
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Re: Silent Lover
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by emystar on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 07:28:06 PM AEST
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I'd say this is a masterpeice.
It's hard to find the kindda luv u have for this person. The reason I say this is 'cause u want their happiness above your own feelings.
definently rare luv u give.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Silent Lover
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by mylady on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 10:47:34 PM AEST
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Sad poem..happiness above your own feelings
is a good person .Good luck |
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Re: Silent Lover
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 11:02:39 AM AEST
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heartbreakingly beautiful... hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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