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Forsaken World
Contributed by
the_fallen
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Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 02:09:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Walking down a forsaken road
Voices of the doomed call
Dark clouds rain over the land
The dead rise to roam this putrid world
River is filled with blood of the fools
A world of lies, a world of the forsaken
The truth is not known, only the darkness inside their hearts rule
Lost of all feelings, lost of all knowledge, lost of all logic
Mankind continues to dirty the world
Blood and tears fall down from the sky
Nothing lives, yet nothing dies
The twilight of dawn comes, but it will forever remain dark
This is the world of the forgotten, the world of the forsaken
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the_fallen
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2005-05-28 14:09:10]
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Re: Forsaken World
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 03:27:29 PM AEST
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| This is such an intelligent, well worded poem...I love the line; "Blood and tears fall down from the sky, nothing lives, yet nothing dies..." Great write. Scorp. |
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Re: Forsaken World
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by ll on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 05:26:30 PM AEST
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| hi you! |
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Re: Forsaken World
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by lady-quiet-dreamer on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 02:36:50 PM AEST
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| griping. truly griping and vivid. |
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Re: Forsaken World
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 06:10:47 PM AEST
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| I know of this world very well. I at times believed that I am one of the forsaken soul that dwells in this dark place. This poem was awesome and it reached to me. Excellent job!!!! |
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