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Lonely
Contributed by
socialmisfit
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Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 12:59:45 PM in AEST
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hello my dreams
its nice to see your still breakin'
shattered and spread on reams and reams
of bleached white paper, my hearts token
testaments of my lost hope
time is supposed to heal all wounds
yet merely is it cover up
painting over the faults
hoping no one see's the cracks
gentle melancholia
tugging on tomorrows lost desire
as my pen scribbles my heart
on the red pages of romance
these words are just words
till they tear my soul asunder
then they become knives
to devoured my soul as plunder
razor blade kisses
inspired insight your lips enchant me
and i beg of you, kiss me once again
and take away my pain.
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socialmisfit
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2005-05-28 12:59:45]
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Re: Lonely
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 01:04:08 PM AEST
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| hmmm i like this write alot and the ending was great. |
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Re: Lonely
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 01:12:35 PM AEST
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Really good finish, and I really liked the whole 'words are just words, until they become knives' part...Intense. This is very well worded. Keep it up, this is great!
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Re: Lonely
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by Mild_Tempest on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 02:38:09 PM AEST
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| Nice poem, beautiful words, beautiful meanings. Keep it up. |
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Re: Lonely
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 05:33:46 PM AEST
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| Beautiful poem - it all flowed together so wonderfully. You have a real talent with words. |
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Re: Lonely
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 09:39:08 AM AEST
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It was a great read. I liked the part of the RAZOR BLADE KISSES. that was cool. Great job.
take care
christina |
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