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My imagery has faded...
Contributed by
In_a_While
on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 12:59:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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this empty house has no voice
except the echo of mine
no one hears lack of choice
that we all fade in time
these walls are my shell
that protect me from pain
but they're also my hell
my pills of white stain
my imagery is fading
you'll now see me for real
in shallow waters i'm wading
for cold fish i can steal
i don't want to be seen
cause i'm addict of black
my pain can be mean
and my sympathy slack
these are my walls
none can break through
yes i hear all your calls
but i'm painted too blue....to care.
dw
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Re: My imagery has faded...
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by SocialMisfit on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 01:01:26 PM AEST
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cool poem, i liked the flow.it sounds really good.
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Re: My imagery has faded...
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 01:15:55 PM AEST
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This was very good! It's nice to read a straightforward write once in awhile...Not everything has to be metaphors. Love the ending, by the way. Good job.
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Re: My imagery has faded...
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by marshmalloska on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 04:14:27 PM AEST
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I hate the feeling, i think you need some inpiration.
Nice write though, you seem to have sqeezed quite a lot of what you claim to have lost in there |
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Re: My imagery has faded...
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by sride686 on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 12:46:34 PM AEST
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| A good write and it does flow well. give it time your mind will return to its old self with time my friend....Steve |
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