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Promises
Contributed by
punkprincess6689
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Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 09:23:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You promised me the mooon
You promised me the stars
You promised me you'd love me forever
You promised you'd never break my heart
All those promises you kept
And we were happy for awhile
Til you broke the promise
That meant the most to me
You broke my heart
Into a thousand pieces
So there's no way
That it can ever be repaired
All the pain
I's a constant reminder
Of how much I loved you
And how you hurt me so much
Copyright ©
punkprincess6689
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2005-05-28 09:23:23]
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Re: Promises
(User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 09:34:09 AM AEST
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I like the poem it has such a raw feeling in to it. The only thing i saw was the spelling erros you had, which you could re-check again just to be sure.
But i like the poem so it's all ok.
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Re: Promises
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 12:52:13 PM AEST
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This was good...A very emotionally charged write. Don't worry; you'll find someone worthy of your heart. Keep up the poetry!
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Re: Promises
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by brokenwings on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 08:04:19 PM AEST
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i loved it good write..
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