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Crystal Tears
Contributed by
pixie
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Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 09:07:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Now I cry crystal tears,
That have been frozen for years,
They gently fall down my face,
Enjoying their emotional race.
I can taste the fear in my mouth,
Deep fear that needs to break out,
But I don’t dare to unleash,
Something I know will never cease.
I wipe my eyes as I stand alone,
Chilled through my body & bone,
I feel the ice creep up inside,
Only in my loneliness can I confide.
My heart wanders into dark,
It fails to hear the angles hark,
The power behind darkness,
Is cruel & so very selfish.
It wants me all to it’s self,
Fill my soul with the devils wealth,
Make me emptier than I already am,
I know it will & it knows it can.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2005-05-28 09:07:17]
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Re: Crystal Tears
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 09:22:37 AM AEST
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God i have missed your poems. This was just incredible Kriss.
You do write the one of most greatest poetry in here. Great writing as always sweetie.
Jane xx |
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Re: Crystal Tears
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by Sinned on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 09:56:27 AM AEST
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Pixie
The chill of being alone
The selling of a soul
This is the way I read your poem
Am I wrong
I emencly enjoy your poems.
Sinned |
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Re: Crystal Tears
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 11:25:26 AM AEST
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u know there r a lot of queens in name only
on this site, but u r the genuine article,your
poetry transends the scope the mundane
your words r like a showering of pixie dust
from tinker bells magic wand . . .
Ben
aka Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Crystal Tears
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 11:36:45 AM AEST
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Omg i miss your writes too.
Pixie hun do i ever hear you girl.This poem is so sad and emotional i dont know what to say.
we all love ya
hugs |
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Re: Crystal Tears
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 12:21:47 PM AEST
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Great imagery and emotion from this one!!!
Awsome! |
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Re: Crystal Tears
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by sride686 on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 01:37:06 PM AEST
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Wow a really dark and heart felt write and I’m glad I read. Take care my friend and I’m sorry I don’t have time to write more for a comment things are busy over here in Iraq.
I wipe my eyes as I stand alone,
Chilled through my body & bone,
I feel the ice creep up inside,
Only in my loneliness can I confide
This stanza really gripped my heart and it had great imagery. It made me feel like this was me feeling the pain. It was truly a masterpiece and I thank you for sharing your pain….Steve
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Re: Crystal Tears
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 11:09:10 AM AEST
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strong, haunting, beautiful.... hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Crystal Tears
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by givingin on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 12:40:27 PM AEST
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Great write hun!.
I havn't commented on your writing for a while,but this just blew me away.
Awsome!
I loved it.
I can realate as well.
Keep it up!
*~givingin~* |
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Re: Crystal Tears
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 08:35:56 PM AEST
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| Excellent |
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Re: Crystal Tears
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 03:31:35 PM AEST
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Damn I've missed you Krisse, and your poems.
You are still one of my favourites poets on this site, and this is now one of my favourite poems.
So sad sweety, but I can sense that you are strong.
You can get through this.
Fabulous write my friend,
*hugs tons and tons*
Phil xxx |
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Re: Crystal Tears
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 10:57:11 PM AEST
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| such an amazing poem, pixie. i especially liked the originality and the rhyme work put into this piece. |
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