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Stu
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 08:49:40 AM in AEST
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Stu
Granny was walking along the path
Enjoying the rains aftermath
From under a leaf she heard a sound
She looked and a small ladybug she found
Into her hand the bug did climb
Saying my lady your hair looks sublime
Flatterer Granny exclaimed
Then laughed kind Sir my heart you tamed
He told her his name was Stu
And he had a story for you
Of his travels from far down south
And his escape from a Cardinals mouth
He talked of grand weather
And how soft was a dove’s feather
Timeless was the tales he spun
And it was near dark before he was done
Granny thanked him for the company
And set him on a flower sweet
She turned to go back again home
And from her place she would not roam
For she was comfortable where she was
And did not want to travel as Stu does
But his adventures she loved to hear
And hoped he would once again draw near
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Re: Stu
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by bernard on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 11:27:05 AM AEST
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| Shari this poem is delightful and will be a big hit with children. All the best from bernard |
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Re: Stu
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 11:34:11 AM AEST
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This was a nice write! I admit; the title drew me in cause that's my Dad's name...lol
Keep up the good work! Scorp. |
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Re: Stu
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 01:26:40 PM AEST
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Now that was so unique, whoever heard of talking to a ladybug except to say, "Fly Fly Away little ladybug your home is on fire, your children will burn up!" of such when I was child, and still today.
This was fantastic Shari, I was right there with Granny. Listening, and your images in my mind eye were so vivid and radiant. You are so talented Shari. You should write children's stories and put them all neatly in a book.
Wonderful
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consue |
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Re: Stu
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 11:11:55 AM AEST
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this is wonderful shari! hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Stu
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by venkat on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 01:05:06 AM AEST
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| Wow..what a delightful write.Stu's adventures are great.:-) venkat |
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