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why is God laughing at me?
Contributed by
bethers_is_my_baby
on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 08:26:58 AM in AEST
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you say god loves me
that he loves me and you
and nothing will change that
no matter what we do
you say that he just wants us happy
that being with you isnt a sin
but i feel like cause i was with you and happy
his torture is for what im in
i knew that this would happen
that you were just too good to be true
and i think that deep down inside
you knew it would happen too
so tell me, if god loves me so much
even more than you said you loved me
then why does it feel like now that im miserable again
that he's up there laughing up me?
Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato
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Re: why is God laughing at me?
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 11:39:22 AM AEST
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awww dont ever say gods laughing at you.
Because beyond anything God do love you.
Thats why Jesus died and paid for our sins so we all could go to heaven.
have faith hugs |
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Re: why is God laughing at me?
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 12:29:51 AM AEST
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| So well written. Nice work. |
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Re: why is God laughing at me?
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by xXcrossedXx on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 10:09:26 AM AEST
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Very nice write the ending didn't quite flow but I enjoyed the thought and the piece.
--amanda-- |
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Re: why is God laughing at me?
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by lil_noel09 on
Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 05:21:29 PM AEST
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| awww...I am soo sorry! I know what it's like to think you know someone and then find out you don't...but I promise you God is not up there laughing at you! God is the one drying your tears and patting your back. -hugs- nice write |
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