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READY
Contributed by
bethers_is_my_baby
on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 08:20:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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look at me
dont walk away
ive still got things i need to say
dont talk to me
just shut up
loose that smirk before i slap it off your mouth
do you really think i deserve this pain
all the ***** you put me through
dont you think ive had enough?
cause i know that i sure do
cause im
ready to snap, ready to break
ready to take all the risks
i never thought i would take
and im...
ready to hurt, ready to kill
ready to do whatever
i need to make you pay
say what you mean
mean what you say
dont say ***** just to make me go away
dont lie to me
tell the truth
dont just say what you think i wanna hear
do you think i cant see through you
all the lies you tell me to my face?
do you think i dont know its all just bull*****?
well, im not as dumb as you might think
and im....
ready to snap, ready to break
ready to take all the risks
i never thought i would take
and im...
ready to hurt, ready to kill
ready to do whatever
i need to make you pay
and im....
ready to snap, ready to break
ready to take all the risks
i never thought i would take
and im...
ready to hurt, ready to kill
ready to do whatever
i need to make you pay
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2005-05-28 08:20:14]
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Re: READY
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by Kitty06 on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 03:15:06 PM AEST
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| I could actually hear this as a song in my head as I read it. The chorus is great, I love how they're not all the same, and how they're both repeated twice at the end. It gives good closure. Excellent job. |
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Re: READY
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by lonelypoet08 on
Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 11:30:11 PM AEST
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| i really really like these lyrics. it would make an awesome song, one that i would love to hear. |
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Re: READY
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Saturday, 3rd December 2005 @ 05:02:57 AM AEST
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really good. I could hear it in my mind.. I liked the flow and the rythmn.. great job..
christina |
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