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The Tale of a Fading Star
Contributed by
AnastasiaN
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Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 04:13:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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i know you could never understand
that behind fairy tales is broken glass
and i'm beginning to believe
that love is an illusion
the sky will never look the same again
where our stars crossed paths
suddenly one of them turned back
and we both stumbled off the track
a thousand years of light
and ours burned out so soon
that's why i relent this defeat
and i hand it over to you
i know that time won't change a thing
when my prayers go unanswered
and my dreams unfulfilled
and the future is so unsure
now there's nothing at stake
there's nothing left of my heart to break
but it feels like i've already been here
and i feel myself let go and fade
and i hope to shade the world
as my star burns out and i desintegrate
and all this pain rains down like dust
and settles on our tragic fate
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AnastasiaN
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Re: The Tale of a Fading Star
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by OnAngelswings on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 08:16:47 AM AEST
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This is very good...and sad,I hope things get better for oyu...hangin ,ok.
Shari :)
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Re: The Tale of a Fading Star
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by writer4life22 on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 10:56:14 AM AEST
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| this is a great poem you really touched my heart. I hope life gets better for you. xo Katie |
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Re: The Tale of a Fading Star
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 12:33:48 PM AEST
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Your feelings are so clear in this piece...very emotive. We've all been here, and it sucks! You expressed the sadness of it quite well. Keep up the writes.
Scorp. |
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