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a lil now and then
Contributed by
brokenwings
on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 09:58:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I wanted to write this letter
filled with agnoy and anger
but I knew so much better
i knew of the sure danger
so i write this letter
in anguish, regret, and bleakness
but every now and then
i do miss you
Nothing can be said
to take away this pain
all words are now dead
blood tears, fall like the summer rain
but every now and then
i dance in that same rain
I miss your eyes, your lips, your voice
but i knew you made your choice
now the affliction is all mine
bitterness slowly creeps in
I now know to love you is a sin
but i still miss you now and then...
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brokenwings
... [
2005-05-27 21:58:05]
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Re: a lil now and then
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 10:01:28 PM AEST
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You know, so many of my poems start off as letters, and then somewhere in the middle it sort of shifts. It's strange lol...
This is a wonderful write you have it. It's so sincere and lovely. Great job! |
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Re: a lil now and then
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by LonelyDork on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 12:02:42 AM AEST
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sad, truthful and moving writing...hope you find happinees again and your pain goes away
¤G®I]V[¤ |
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