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Fake Rose
Contributed by
TheKid
on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 09:13:55 PM in AEST
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Where has our love gone?
He thought as he awoke with a loud yawn.
Married for five years
Plauged with countless and seemingly endless tears.
Love once filled with kindness
Has been covered with total blindness
She felt he no longer valued her beautiful soul
Pleasing her was no longer his goal.
He drove to a store
Slamming his car door
Speeding with anger
He was in trouble of great danger
The light turned red
and quickly he was....... well, he was dead
The police rushed to the scene, and it started to rain
The other driver was at a loss for words as he tried to explain
Back at his house
It was quieter than a mouse
His wife heard the alarm go off
As she woke up with a violent cough
She went downstairs to the kitchen and saw a note
It was something the husband had wrote
She read it slowly in her mind, "Went to the store, I love you"
Her feelings suddenly turned blue
There was a knock at the door
Like a loud thunderous roar
She was told the news
As she fell, from off her shoes
The officer handed her what he had found, it was a fake flower and a card
It was bloody and scarred
She read it outloud, "I will love you until the day this flower dies"
She nelt down and prayed... saying her final goodbyes.
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Re: Fake Rose
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by Kitty06 on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 09:26:02 PM AEST
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| This poem is so amazing! So wonderfully amazing! The idea of eternal love through a flower that can never die is....there is no word. |
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Re: Fake Rose
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by Fears on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 09:39:26 PM AEST
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Omg that is so sad and so loving and so ..everything!
just keep posting!
~Fears |
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Re: Fake Rose
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by sprinter27 on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 09:41:31 PM AEST
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powerful poem. i like it a lot. keep up the good work.
~sprints |
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Re: Fake Rose
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by Mikayla on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 06:14:49 PM AEST
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| Did this really happen? I cant tell. It made me cry. Wonderful work The Kid. Im praying for you. I read it a second time. |
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