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Come Fly Away
Contributed by
Rakerman1999
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Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 08:24:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Come fly away with me my sweet
On cotton clouds our souls will meet
Two lonesome hearts as one will beat
Forevermore upon the skies
As spirit lovers shall we dance
Eternally in true romance
We'll take this one and only chance
To dwell within each others eyes
The moon will laugh and stars will smile
The sun will wish it had our style
With Angels singing all the while
A serenade of love in rhyme
And happy tears will fall as rain
Forgotten, all the worldly pain
So high above this mortal plain
To dance until the end of time
L. Carling c2005
Copyright ©
Rakerman1999
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Re: Come Fly Away
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 08:40:48 PM AEST
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Beautiful writing, if I was a woman you would have swept me off my feet with this one. (thinking about it, retract that last statement!)
Excellent work.
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Re: Come Fly Away
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by ForeverAlone on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 08:50:14 PM AEST
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Beautiful job Larry, your writes are really amazing, im addicted to your style.. ;]]
~Clark |
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Re: Come Fly Away
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by shelby on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 08:54:31 PM AEST
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beautiful as always Larry the King is back:)
Michelle |
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Re: Come Fly Away
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by sprinter27 on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 09:05:38 PM AEST
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wonderful write. it's powerful. i just wish everybody could think like you. keep up the good work!
~sprints |
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Re: Come Fly Away
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by Willofree on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 09:42:18 PM AEST
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I just really like your poetic style... it is so poetic :) The imagery is so enticing with a beautiful flow and rhythum. It is as if put together out of spun glass, so delicate and fancy...so magical.
Super job, sir
Will |
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Re: Come Fly Away
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by TheKid on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 09:51:18 PM AEST
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| wow... awesome stuff! |
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Re: Come Fly Away
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 10:09:01 PM AEST
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| This gave me goosebumps. It's so beautiful! You're imagery was perfection and I felt such an increadible sense of affection. Amazing job. |
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Re: Come Fly Away
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 11:41:49 PM AEST
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Even in my extremely tired state I can tell that
this was an awesome and beautiful poem.
The rhyme scheme was art in its highest
form and really added to the overall allure (or
whatever you want to call it) of the poem. I
think the third stanza stood out to me the
most specifically how the moon, stars, and
sun, respectively, were personified.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Come Fly Away
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 01:14:33 AM AEST
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I have never read less than great from you. Larry, you are an amazing poet. I read your work in hopes of learning what your secret is Guess I would just have to have your mind and heart.
Excellent,
Rita |
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Re: Come Fly Away
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 02:52:53 AM AEST
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Oh gosh this is just beautiful Larry. It's ooh so romantic.
Nicely done as always.
J xx |
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Re: Come Fly Away
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 04:57:07 AM AEST
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wow if i wasn't in love with my husband i would fall in love with your words.lol
beautiful and awsome write. |
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Re: Come Fly Away
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 12:12:28 PM AEST
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Speaks 4 itself my friend and bar keep go home 4 the day put larry behind the bar and let him play, lovely as usual . . .
Ben
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Re: Come Fly Away
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 05:33:46 PM AEST
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truely beautiful larry, your flow and style are perfect, i love it:) my best to you and yours, hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Come Fly Away
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by jaeann on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 08:50:43 PM AEST
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| :) YES!!!!! |
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Re: Come Fly Away
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by Kie on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 06:22:56 AM AEST
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Originally I chose the title of your poem due to old memories of dancing with my father to Sinatra's "Come fly with me lets fly lets fly away". Big smile here, wonderful memories.
Now back to your poem.
You have such depth, spirit and a pen that makes our mind envision the greatest of romances.
I think I can safely say that you WRITE WHAT WE LOVE TO READ. *Note* I shouted that with a southern twang.
I'm glad you're here L. Truly.
Kie |
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Re: Come Fly Away
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 05:58:24 PM AEST
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Very good to see you posting again, Larry. As usual, your words are magical...
Jenni |
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Re: Come Fly Away
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by wizard on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 05:52:38 PM AEST
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your talent shines through with every word...great poem.
wizard |
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Re: Come Fly Away
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 04:27:04 PM AEST
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Ok Larry my cases are packed when do we fly....if life is as beautiful as this write with you then lets float away
Love Angelxx |
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