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Maleovolent beauty
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 08:03:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Maleovolent beauty
Like faded glory, and demise bringing death
Serrated imperfection, deminish even the best
Broken melodies, shadow the burnt page
Shattered reflections, ease the on-going rage
Like dust to the wind, and the tide to the shores
Ominous rain decends, currupting the quality more
Luminous blood, taints the present and past
Maleovolent beauty, cracks at each failed grasp
Like the sun, crawling across the bleeding sky
Darkness is soon to fall, to stain with dispair of black dye
Sadistic shards, sever the final veins
Faltered emotions, overspill with numbing pain
Like the sands of an hour glass, the sight of expiering time
And how a rose proves to be a sign of love
. . .
Though it always dies
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
... [
2005-05-27 20:03:13]
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Re: Maleovolent beauty
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 08:26:32 PM AEST
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Very cleverly written!! I really like this. Love the beginning, the end, and everything in between! Good job.
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Re: Maleovolent beauty
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 08:37:30 PM AEST
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| you already know that i love it and that its my favorite. what you should know is that it is your best.... |
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Re: Maleovolent beauty
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 09:13:47 PM AEST
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o well done clark! i LOVES it I LoVES it!!!!
ur are amazing and i love your word use, beautiful
all ur poems are so original!
well done!!!! |
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Re: Maleovolent beauty
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by xXcrossedXx on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 09:50:39 AM AEST
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I LOVE it, as usual. It was a very intelligent write and the structure was perfect, great job.
--amanda-- |
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Re: Maleovolent beauty
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 5th August 2020 @ 02:47:43 PM AEST
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| Love it.......and I/'/m a fan. |
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