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Dear Momma
Contributed by
Nazmythian
on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 04:48:13 PM in AEST
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It’s been quite some time
Since I last wrote you
There’s been some changes in my life
Some I’m still goin’ through
And I’ve waited much too long
To write down these words
So if you close your eyes
And think of me
I only hope that they’ll be heard
Dear Momma,
I love you
That is what I’m tryin’ to say
And I’m sorry for the tears
That I’ve caused over the years
As my life went astray
I only hope it’s not too late
And a mother’s love can wait
For a son who knew it all
To finally take a fall
And try to get his life set straight
Do you remember the boy
With all his little toys?
Can it be like it was then, back when I was only ten
And I was still your pride and joy
Lord, if I could take away
All the sorrow and the pain
The wondrin’ where you went wrong
In the words of a song
I’d have done it yesterday
Dear Momma,
I love you
Is what I’ve been tryin’ to say
And I’m sorry for the tears
That I’ve caused over the years
As my life went astray
I only hope it’s not too late
And a mother’s love can wait
For a son who knew it all
To finally take a fall
And try to get his life set straight
Dear Momma,
I love you
Is what I wanted most
To say
( I spoke to my Mom today, and suddenly this just came flooding back )
I LOVE YOU MOM !!!
Copyright ©
Nazmythian
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Re: Dear Momma
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 05:47:10 PM AEST
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awwwww sweet! buddy!!!!
I bet your mom desreves a BIG hug after raising you!!!!! LOL
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Re: Dear Momma
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 07:22:27 PM AEST
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Awww Nazzy! You probably made her heart burst with love when you wrote this for her...This is so sweet, and MUCH better than what my Mum gets from me...! lol She gets goofy writes from me!! I loved this.
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Re: Dear Momma
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by Fears on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 07:28:31 PM AEST
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that was soo friken adorable! I loved it so much so am sure that your mom went balistic ( in a happy way )
Great write so keep posting!
~Fears |
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Re: Dear Momma
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 09:10:04 PM AEST
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I think you have a kind heart !! This poem is so filled with emotion and love it is truely heart warming ! I know as having a son of my own that my love for him is unconditional and never ending !, I bet your mother is extremely proud of you and how sweet of you to write this for her!!! thankyou for writing such a beautiful poem!!
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Re: Dear Momma
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 01:51:00 AM AEST
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This brings back a memory from last year when I got my first apology from my eldest son for all the things he did to upset me when he was young. This is wonderful and every Mother should realize all her love and worry and pain was worth it in the end. This is great, Scott, just like you.
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Re: Dear Momma
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by emystar on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 03:03:52 AM AEST
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A masterpeice for any mom.
very good.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Dear Momma
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 03:39:32 AM AEST
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Aww Nazzy you’re such a sweetie. I’m sure you Moma loved this beautiful song.
Hugs,
JJ xx |
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Re: Dear Momma
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 05:01:53 AM AEST
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Awww Nazzy that is so sweet...
Now wheres that picture of you lol?
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Re: Dear Momma
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by FleurdeSang on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 09:19:36 AM AEST
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Mon ami chéri, votre mère doit être si fière de vous. Ce chef-d'oeuvre poétique dégoutte avec l'émotion, l'amour éternel, et la beauté au delà de compare. Comme toujours, je suis sans souffle. Un tribut magnifique à votre mère. Simplement perfectionner.
An impeccable dedication to your darling mother, cheri Scott. Your love for her is eloquently stated, and truly felt. I'd make a song for my mother as well... yet, I don't have the same musical abilities you do, lol. A poetic work of art that every son/daughter should read to their mother. Heart-felt, and simply divine. All my love. Forever,
Your dear friend/avid fan,
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by OnAngelswings on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 09:42:21 PM AEST
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| This is simply beautiful...any mother would be proud....Shari :) |
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Re: Dear Momma
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 06:45:54 PM AEST
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this is sooo beautiful...... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Dear Momma
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by Silent-No-More on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 02:32:16 PM AEST
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God, this really touches me. I'm just that way, I'm afraid... I get all sorts of sappy when it comes to stuff like this. I can only imagine that it was an extraordinary moment for both of you when you sang it to her. The write is beautiful... but to be honest... I think it's what is in the author's note that really moves me.
Oh and... I'm betting she already knew. *winks*
~Snem~
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Re: Dear Momma
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 04:13:14 PM AEST
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I have meant to comment on this for days, but I couldn't bring myself to do it.
(I didn't know what to say)
This is wonderful Nazzy. It is an amazing poem, and I so hope she adores it as much as I do. (And everyone else does if the comments are anything to go by. lol)
A gorgeous, heatfelt, touching write,
*hugs tons*
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Re: Dear Momma
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by Willofree on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 08:23:08 AM AEST
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A beautiful tribute Nazzy, and so eloquently written. It depicts a lot of wisdom and your own personal growth. The tenderness is very touching indeed!
A wonderful expression of love, Thanks for sharing my friend
Will
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Re: Dear Momma
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by freckle on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 06:40:00 PM AEST
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Naz, you made me cry. My stupid son hasn't reached that point yet. I only pray he will before he ruins his whole life. Thanks for the cry! Great write!
Carol |
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