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Going Commando

Contributed by blackmarker on Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 03:59:09 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



Meticulously smooth
Nude legs
Shaking and quivering
[and what for?]
Revealing skirts
Flirty, open-toed shoes
Skipping ‘cross rained-
Out parking lots
[and what for?]
Dancing on hoods
Of illegally-parked Toyotas
With broken shopping carts
Dragging along behind
[and what for?]
Falling asleep
Wrapped in teddy-
Bear hugs
Waking to see the night sky
Dripping away, into dawn
[and what for?]
Consciousness revealing only
Loneliness and cold sheets
And biting tears and
Shuddering lips
[and what for?]
Haste-strewn notes on
Post-dated envelopes wishing
You a ‘Happy Morning’ and a
‘Happy Rest-of-your-Life’
[and what for?]
Suitcases packed and sunglasses down
With ribbons in your hair
Hop onto a westbound train
[and what for?]
Run away from mistakes
And heartbreaks
And all else you ever touched
[and what for?]
Solitude and happiness
Lurking within ear-ravaging noise
Emitted from old headphones
[and what for?]
Just walk away, and pray and
Laugh and live and pretend that
You never had a first love,
And you were never abandoned.



Copyright © blackmarker ... [ 2005-05-27 15:59:09]
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Re: Going Commando (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 05:46:25 PM AEST
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Well written this most certainly is. Your words are each powerful, and on a very meaningful theme. I liked the repetition as well.

Here's to hoping you'll grace us with more writing sometime soon.

Andrew




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