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Here Comes Vegas
Contributed by
Pisces101
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Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 03:36:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Here comes a chance for me to see
how much more I can take
Here comes more time for you to be free
another chance for me to break
Here comes Vegas
Here comes another independence day
for your non sense drinking
Here comes just another way
for you to disregard what I've been thinking
Here comes Vegas
Here comes another day on my own
another day for me to be good to you
Here comes another chance to be alone
One more day for me to struggle through.
Here comes Vegas
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Re: Here Comes Vegas
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by alyssakoren_03 on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 04:19:17 PM AEST
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that was intresting...nice write
lots of luvin'
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Re: Here Comes Vegas
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by shelby on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 06:09:19 PM AEST
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interesting indeed......
no need to struggle in Vegas its all fun there my friend believe me Im there alot
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Re: Here Comes Vegas
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 11:39:01 PM AEST
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I actually remember your writes about this guy...Are you still with him? I hope for your sake you've moved on, or he's at least treating you better...Your emotions are conveyed well in this piece. I can feel your dread and despair...So sad. Good job with this write...
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