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Mending Broken Hearts
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 02:01:45 PM in AEST
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When one door closes, another one opens
she looked deeply into his minds eye, and gave him a token
a reprieve for love lost but not love gained
a nourishing smile given, yet his face still strained...
Lovingly she took out the key to unlock his wounded heart
his pulse was weak; looking skyward, begging to depart
she swept up broken shards and sewed up the rest
perhaps a little smaller now, but she gave it her very best
"Now c'mon, please m'dear, will you try this on for size?"
pointing out that only a small part of him met its untimely demise
Tentatively he reached out for his newly repaired heart;
with a smile and a sigh, she welcomed his brave new start
Clasping hand tightly, they walk; her leading the way
he glances back forlornly at the chunk of his heart already in decay
She didn't know how to soothe his worries, but wanted him to know;
she was there yesterday, is still today, and will be tomorrow....
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Re: Mending Broken Hearts
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 03:31:23 PM AEST
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Yes, you're right. This is such a nice write and it says a lot about you that you don't just think of yourself. I really appreciate this poem. J.
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Re: Mending Broken Hearts
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by jyssvw22 on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 05:18:17 PM AEST
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| some may be so bold as to call me a man, and as such, i thank you for this awesome write, knowing full well, that you, are one of them, yet you still can understand, i loved it! |
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Re: Mending Broken Hearts
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by freckle on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 06:37:21 PM AEST
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Nice write Scorp.....I love your use of imagery.....very vivid picture are created by it....great job!
Carol |
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Re: Mending Broken Hearts
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by mina-1 on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 08:24:43 PM AEST
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Hey Scorp this is an awesome and very well written piece of poetry. U never cease to amaze me with each poem u produce it always out does the other. You're a very talented and skilled writer who has such awesome flare with a pen. Thumbs up to ya.
I loved it. well done Scorp.
*hugs*n*love* ya friend,
~sue~ |
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Re: Mending Broken Hearts
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 02:12:25 AM AEST
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This is a powerfully caring piece of work. We all hurt sometimes. Men hurt just like we do only they don't get the emotional support we usually get. How do they get through it all without it? I have always had my friends and family to bolster me. Men usually only have themselves for otherwise it is not 'manly'.
Great write.
Rita |
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Re: Mending Broken Hearts
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 05:03:22 AM AEST
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wow scorp that is a awsome piece.
grest job. |
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Re: Mending Broken Hearts
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 05:03:22 AM AEST
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wow scorp that is a awsome piece.
grest job. |
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Re: Mending Broken Hearts
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 09:29:23 AM AEST
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Scorp this was such a well writen write. I like the originality of this and i think thats good.
Jane xx |
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Re: Mending Broken Hearts
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by sride686 on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 11:53:59 AM AEST
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| Wow you truly broke me down on this one. So much pain and love in this write my heart skipped a beat. thank you for writing about pain that we feel as well. I wish I had someone who could do this for me. Well I guess I do I have friends and just in the last month I met a new friend on this site who helps me in this way. Take care and this was a very beautiful write that touched my heart. Your friend….Steve |
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Re: Mending Broken Hearts
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 03:04:04 AM AEST
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| Wishing someone would do this for me. You have a beautiful caring heart and this is a beautifully happy & sad all at the same time. Totally awesome write!!! :) |
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Re: Mending Broken Hearts
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by Kie on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 08:08:45 PM AEST
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I thought this was full. It felt completed and the ending also felt well.....right..
Kie |
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