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My empty heart is never filled
Contributed by
In_a_While
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Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 01:55:12 PM in AEST
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i'm soon to be gone from this place
this site of what's all been so swell
i need to breathe fresh air
to replenish words i will tell
see, my anger is faded
hurt always fueled my dark art
now i'm numb to what's jaded
i can't be told what to start
these words that i shared, were like teeth that i bared
but now i am empty of thought
it was nice for the time, but i'm spent of good rhyme
and i can't see what's inside the pot
so here's for the moment...time writes when it can
perhaps for awhile... i'll smile for the sun
dw
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Re: My empty heart is never filled
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 02:52:41 PM AEST
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| lol I can relate to this...Sorry to hear you're empty of writes at the moment, but good to know things are bright in your life right now. That's always good! Don't worry, you'll soon be inspired again---hopefully by something positive...! Scorp. |
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Re: My empty heart is never filled
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by echo03 on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 03:43:26 PM AEST
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i know how you feel i haven't been able to write a decent poem since last summer, writters block sucks smurfs lol nice job though
!koren! |
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Re: My empty heart is never filled
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by mina-1 on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 08:34:15 PM AEST
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Aww DW I know this feeling, lol. It'll soon pass and you'll be back in no time. It's really great to hear that things are looking up for u. We all go through a writers block my friend. I went through it about 2 months ago and boy I couldn't wait to get back on track. It shall pass soon. Positive thoughts dear friend. Ya need anything pm me ok.
*hugs*n*love*
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Re: My empty heart is never filled
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by sride686 on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 11:06:22 AM AEST
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| Well DW as you know I had writers block and it didn’t last to long it comes and goes. Good luck to you on your writes but I hope you don’t go. Take sometime and it will return I look forward to more of your writes in a week or a few days what ever comes first. Bye for now my friend and I hope to see you around….Steve |
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