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Suicidal Momentum
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 01:12:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Majestic maker please cast off my mind’s rage
Make known the way out to this most tortuous cage
Praying doesn’t help only reaffirms my sinful state
How can I regain God’s favour when he looks upon me with hate?
Breathing serves no purpose for I simply waste precious air
I continue to decay down in the dark recesses of my own lair
Death does abide by the will of the lunacy that does consume
Matched with my utter hopelessness that always seems to loom
Suddenly I feel so alive
As on the bittersweet adrenalin of death
My mind does thrive
All at once by thoughts of perishing I am darkly thrilled
My body spasms with fulfillment as any remainder of sanity is killed
Receding hope as the momentum drives my reluctant soul
Pointing the gun at my worthless head I blow through a hole
Copyright ©
pUnKa_RaCh
... [
2005-05-27 01:12:03]
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Re: Suicidal Momentum
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by iodinelove on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 01:24:22 AM AEST
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The world is a 45
splatter the mother****er all over the wall
I liked it. I thought it was good. I'm no good at comments. But it was good.
always, abraham
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Re: Suicidal Momentum
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by spookshowbaby on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 03:26:38 AM AEST
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